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Gua nak mintak pendapat korang pasal cerita ni. Gua tulis 2 tahun lepas. Antara cubaan-cubaan awal menulis cerita. Amacam, boleh jadi tak cerita ni? Ada ala-ala novel tak cara penyampaian dia? Lu nak kutuk ke keji ke gua takde hal, cuma gua nak mintak pendapat (honest) korang je pasal cerita ni. Sila Baca

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1. Written by This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it , on 16-07-2007 15:04
saya nak ucap selamat berumur 3 tahun. peace...

2. Written by This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it , on 16-07-2007 15:05
teknik penceritaan yang baik..cuma ending tu terlalu terburu²...

neway....aku suka struktur dan ayat yang kau guna...

3. Written by Kumprinx, on 16-07-2007 15:17
beckzaidan, lu pun 3 tahun gak kan? Selamat selamat..
Terima kasih.

4. Written by This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it , on 16-07-2007 15:36
Ada apa kena mengena dengan SEPTEMBER? aku tahu ko guna tajuk lagu tu, ko leh ubah dengan nama bulan Islam.

Jalan cerita dia senang diteka, babak gosok gigi tu besh aku dapat rasakan feel dia

ko tiru ayat jalil hamid dalam buli

sekarang ko boleh ubah jalan cerita dia, gaji Askar dah naik wei

5. Written by HijauKatak, on 16-07-2007 17:36
Honest opinion : dialog macam skrip drama yusof haslam, cara bercerita selain dialog is originally + uniquely kumprinx, menjadi overall feeling bercampur baur antara yusof haslam dgn kumprinx. Jalan cerita agak interesting, bole jugak jadi 'wwow'.. to tell u the truth, anything that u write mmg ade ur own x-factor lah (bodek ckit.)

6. Written by This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it , on 18-07-2007 15:39
aku sokong je apa yg ko tulis bro...layan..